By Sarah Hope 06 Aug, 2009
Ryan thank you for your comment. I read all of your poems and I absolutely love them. I have no critisism to give you. Just continue the way you are. You have truth and reality in your words and this is refreshing. You rhyme with style and I related to a lot of what you said. I am looking forward to reading more from you. I voted for all your poems.

By Dougie 04 Jul, 2009
Well I liked it while I was reading it kind of turned me on a bit but kind of made me laugh somewhat but I could feel the lust, passion and Happy feeling come all over me body almost weirdly. So well done writers and poets are meant to be able to make people feel what they are writing and almost experience it without actually being there And you have done a great job of that =P

I’m looking forward to more Poems